Elliot Felsenthal
9/8/09
p.7 pt. 1 &2
The last paper I wrote was my 12th grade final research paper on Crime in English literature. It took about 3 weeks before I began to put anything at all on paper. I had to read through pages and pages of research to get an idea of some books I had not read nor had the time to read. My plan began as me trying to wing it and write what I thought of for an entire 3 pages but I soon realized I had to write my ideas down in outline form and form my ideas more fully. As I began writing I had to change and further develop my ideas to make the paper the correct length. When I got stuck on having no more ideas to record my teacher helped me to develop the ideas deeper and in more detail.
p.23 Analyze
- Ran, sprung, flight, split, wound, silently, tore, caught
- Looked, running, considered, vanished, rounding, chased, entered, smashed, glanced, pounding, strained, running, improvising, choosing, discovering, exhilarated, dismayed, stopped
- Everyone had vanished except Mikey Fahey, who was just rounding the corner of the yellow brick house.
His jacket strained over his body.
p. 24 Analyze #1
- Visual- city clothes, suit and tie, street shoes, thin, in his twenties, wet lower pants legs, cuffs full of snow, prow of snow below shoes, redheaded, and skinny
Characterize- determination, furious, springy, incredible
- Looks and sounds: “You stupid kids”, ordinary, normal, usual
Evaluate: perfunctorily, exalting
- She explains him as very determined and unyielding. Dillard makes it very clear that this man is mad and explains his expressions and how she takes them.
Analyze #2
- She describes the snowball as perfectly spherical and made translucent. It was perfect in their mind due to their thinking of it hitting someone and being the most effective.
- In the “backyard labyrinths” it is a mixture of fear and confusion. She did not know where to go and the fear of being chased made it so she could not rationalize where to go.
p.25 Analyze
- Perfunctorily, redundant, formality, passionately, glory, prolong, brooded, dismembered, exalting, righteous,
- All of a sudden we were running for our lives.
He chased Mikey and me around the yellow house.
He caught us and we all stopped.