Monday, September 28, 2009
Rats and effects of alchohol
Meat and Lead poisoning
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Observation Exercises
Elliot Felsenthal
Ms.Sumners-winter
9/24/09
The subject I have decided to observe is a funeral. I will observe the sorrowful occurrence of one loosing a loved one. There will be tears, silence, and much needed reassurance that their love one is in a better place. It will have people from all walks of life and all times from said individual’s life. There will be those who love, hate, and don’t even know the deceased. I will witness the events that unfold as a human being leaves this world and how their lasting impact in other’s lives transform into tears, stories, and general personal grieving.
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
OBservation Exercises
Observation Exercise Video
Im able to focus more because I am alone and I can watch any part I feel I misunderstood. His mother continues to ask him if he wants fish but he denies her each time. This taught me that if you take out one aspect of something then the other aspects are better expressed
Observation Exercise In Class
Thursday, September 10, 2009
When I was Terrified
Elliot Felsenthal
- My worst experience was when I had to bail out of my kayak on the Ocoee River
- I respect the rivers power and force over me
- The utter fear of being dragged down an extremely fast river with no way of stopping and no one to help
Autobiography
Elliot Felsenthal
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Elliot FELSENTHALS assignment
Elliot Felsenthal
9/8/09
p.7 pt. 1 &2
The last paper I wrote was my 12th grade final research paper on Crime in English literature. It took about 3 weeks before I began to put anything at all on paper. I had to read through pages and pages of research to get an idea of some books I had not read nor had the time to read. My plan began as me trying to wing it and write what I thought of for an entire 3 pages but I soon realized I had to write my ideas down in outline form and form my ideas more fully. As I began writing I had to change and further develop my ideas to make the paper the correct length. When I got stuck on having no more ideas to record my teacher helped me to develop the ideas deeper and in more detail.
p.23 Analyze
- Ran, sprung, flight, split, wound, silently, tore, caught
- Looked, running, considered, vanished, rounding, chased, entered, smashed, glanced, pounding, strained, running, improvising, choosing, discovering, exhilarated, dismayed, stopped
- Everyone had vanished except Mikey Fahey, who was just rounding the corner of the yellow brick house.
His jacket strained over his body.
p. 24 Analyze #1
- Visual- city clothes, suit and tie, street shoes, thin, in his twenties, wet lower pants legs, cuffs full of snow, prow of snow below shoes, redheaded, and skinny
Characterize- determination, furious, springy, incredible
- Looks and sounds: “You stupid kids”, ordinary, normal, usual
Evaluate: perfunctorily, exalting
- She explains him as very determined and unyielding. Dillard makes it very clear that this man is mad and explains his expressions and how she takes them.
Analyze #2
- She describes the snowball as perfectly spherical and made translucent. It was perfect in their mind due to their thinking of it hitting someone and being the most effective.
- In the “backyard labyrinths” it is a mixture of fear and confusion. She did not know where to go and the fear of being chased made it so she could not rationalize where to go.
p.25 Analyze
- Perfunctorily, redundant, formality, passionately, glory, prolong, brooded, dismembered, exalting, righteous,
- All of a sudden we were running for our lives.
He chased Mikey and me around the yellow house.
He caught us and we all stopped.